Thy father,
a potter,
lived in the valley green;
Made vases,
carved traces,
held 'em tight together as seen.
Beauty captured,
(In)clay clustered,
Stood proud and tall;
Jealous neighbor,
broke through (the)door,
planned to make it fall.
He took,
off the hook,
with a miser grin on his face;
Smashed it,
into tiny bit(s),
yet took over the case.
Father look!
we shook,
realized he lay there dead;
Speechless,
senseless,
sleeping on his death bed.
Fragile and sad,
surrounded by the bad,
mourning at such grief;
Now we've learnt,
it can't be brought,
together again to stand there stiff.
© Copyright 2011 Azm
a well written story POEM...
ReplyDeletejust loved it...
Super...
You have said a whole story in a poem. that's grt.
:)
haha thanx..but maile bhanna khojya kura kasaile ni bujhya jasto lagena...maile hamro desh ani chimeki rastra ko attyaachaar ko kura lekheko, =P
ReplyDeleteread it once again, considering PN Shah as father, ani uniting nation as pottery! ;)
Surprised... by seeing your sense of writing...now i got it...
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Awesome, simply awesome great!
ReplyDeleteashma darling.. kasto deep thoughts and writing.. i am officially a fan of your poetry!
ReplyDeleteSad but true
ReplyDeleteA Nice One
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