Friday, December 17, 2010

Dear winter!

Composed by: Azm

The chill that runs down my spine
Oh! Winter you’re so not mine.
There the tiny powerless sun I see
And the long darkness waiting for me
Makes me sad; in vain goes my sanity
Feels like a curse for humanity
You’d be admired in a case for sure
If we were penguins we’d absolutely adore

I sit by the window and worse I see
The whole world pictured right before me
The high ones lay in their cozy rooms
But the homeless can lit no fuel
Pity on them; have mercy I say
End your stay and go away
How we long for you to go back
And then the awesome spring to crack!


Copyright ©2010 Azm

5 comments:

  1. Well, not as interesting as the dancing poem but still good enough. Looked like you were writing a rhyme but rooms doesn't rhyme with fuel.

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  2. If you're writing a poetry it isnt necessary to rhyme, it only needs to make sense so that the people reading it understand, using rhymes inappropriately is a big turn off.
    btw thanx for the feedback =)

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  3. Absolutely. It isn't necessary to rhyme. There are various kinds of poems. But if all the other lines rhyme and only one doesn't then there's something missing.

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  4. Oh! Winter you’re so not mine. (Y)

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  5. cool

    regards
    http://nirajsedhai.blogspot.com/

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